Monday, 1 December 2014

Fabulous Florida - innovated persuasive text.

Today, we finished writing our innovated persuasive text about Fabulous Florida in English. The children have been writing their own too...

Fabulous Florida                                  28/11/14

Have you ever wondered what wonderful experiences lay in the Sunshine State of Florida? The captivating land of Florida is surrounded by two seas: the magnificent Atlantic Ocean to the east and the tranquil, gorgeous Gulf of Mexico to the west. You could body board on record breaking waves, discover the hidden, mysterious rock pools or rock away your troubles in a relaxing hammock. Marvel at the white, gold beaches all over Florida which lies on the south-eastern tip of America.

The wonderful experiences in Florida could include walking along the picturesque coastline of Miami to the south or you could build sandcastles in the golden sand and look at the shimmering, silver dolphins to the west. Only a fool would miss out on an opportunity to view this stunning scenery.

In addition to the spectacular scenery, Florida is also home to the coolest, most exciting animal park yet – the Everglades National Park. Tour this tropical wilderness, catch a glimpse of many rare, endangered species and risk a rip-roaring air boat ride on an alligator-infested river! There are so many attractions to choose from.

If it’s a magical day out you are after, where better to fly away on a broomstick to than the Harry Potter theme park in Universal Studios? Florida will have cast you under its spell in a matter of minutes. Don’t forget to say hello to Mickey Mouse and his friends at the world famous Disney Land. It’s amazing, magical and breath-taking!


Why not make your way to fabulous Florida and enter an enchanting, mysterious world of excitement? This really is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity. Why wait, book your fate, don’t hesitate!

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